Jane,
Great job. That gave me chills. This will be one video that I will show to my sixth graders! The addition at the end about the two that crossed the fence was a very good ending showing us that curiosity can get the better of us.
Connie
What a great Father's Day gift. Love the tender music, it's perfect. The speed you chose for the pictures goes very well with your speech and the music. Getting Dad to speak was the final touch. Good job!